Bare feet ... The Harassed Soul ... that floats over the shriveled remains of the Vision – from the bombardment that broke the string of pearls, scattering them all. From the Pearls of Dreams to the Gems of Aims – and everything in between. Picking up the fragments of what's left of the once perfectly crafted Field of Vision- now frail after the blow. The fragments, each now threatens to reduce to dust if so much as merely grazed by the wind of Angst.
The Once-strong Mind, now warns with wobbling knees – should there be any Tonnage of Thoughts or Strain of Sufferings …. The old Warrior might collapse, driving the wispy shadow of Strength and Sanity into Extinction.
9 Raindrop(s)...:
ahh.. And the Journey Begins... stumblin upon aliens lyk 'Blog This!' n 'AtomFeed' n 'WhatNot' ..(well the last one's purpose is, i s'pose to convey my delimas in a uniform fashion). but anyway, my First Post!!:D yay... its not excellent but its frm heart n soul... (i guess dats how newbies usually kick it)...oh! dat dznt mean there wont be more frm Heart & Soul cumin up... those r my Permanent Authors .. my Brain- the editor. usually intervenes . makin me hate him for being there at all.. but.. da Authors usally rnt published widout those damn Editors, anyway.
Hope u guys find it gud enuff (i say this coz my Editor has managed to intrude givin birth to over-thinking ..-- otherwise my rough draft looked pretty amazin,& only needed a few changes..uh-oh its da editor speakin again).
i better go.
Ps.ur feedback-- any suggestions n advice. Always welcum:)
girl.. that was some post...
you sure dont seem liek a newbie to me...
welcome newbie. Mehwish is right though, you may be new to blogging b ut your writing has the scars of a baptism by fire. You've earned your stripes, so to say, and therefore a hearty and excited welcome. I look forward to reading more of your heart and soul.
This was indeed brilliant.
Also, you even read my stupid novella?
I'm a little beyond flattered ;) Hope you enjoyed it...
hey i just finished reading the comment on that post...
it's kinda creepy isn't it.. but funny too in a way...i guess..
and you even infulenced me to try the google thing.. i got to page 7 with no mention of my blog anywhere...
anyways..keep in touch.. it'll be great to get to know you...
mehwish:
thnx soo much hunny... u'r one of the reasons i joined this site, i came across ur wrk wich i just had to comment on, n there wz this annoyin procedure of siging up, n going thru those pain-in-a$$ forms, thinkin i'll probably lose da id &pass on ths bluffer/or blufspot or woteva's name. Yet i joined, da reason can be found on ur "Rainy day's" post). (reason?.. nah more lyk a legend)
beknighted:
This- cumin frm u, is a compliment(i had to be honest here in spite of myself :p)& i jus didnt read ur "novella" half da city knws abt it. maybe i jus wanted them to suffer, dont be flattered. and besides, u knw me i guess.. im da one who mailed u those "unconventional comments" Mishi.. does tht jingle anythin?
n i still think u should be banned, coz the reason i mentioned back in da mail, infuriatingly presists. ugh.
(y do i feel lyk smiling :D)
read "The art of war" by Sun Tzu.
i had to post this here ... wrote a while back ago ...
::: The seventh Warrior :::
A whiff of wind blows by
flutters the flag held high
the field set ablaze in sunlight
the armor is on, ready to fight
for a cause so big
larger than life itself
Here i am, standing on this soil
with head held high, ready as i can be
its a moment of glory
its a battle of truth
Deceit shall die its own death
Honor will last for ever
The tales will be told
the bravery will be followed
Freedom, will be won.
for years to come
for centuries to exist
Redemption
a lucky man’s salvation
a chance worth dying for.
a risk worth taking
a sacrifice worth making
a whiff of wind blows by
flutters the flag held high
Here i am, the seventh warrior
standing in the battle field
as ready as i can ever be.
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